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How to Write a Band 9 IELTS Conclusion

How to Write a Band 9 IELTS Conclusion

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How to Write a Band 9 IELTS Task 2 Conclusion: The Complete Guide

Many IELTS candidates spend hours mastering body paragraphs and introductions, only to rush through their conclusions in the final minutes of the exam. This is a massive mistake. A weak, rushed conclusion can affect your overall Writing Task 2 score.

In this guide, we will break down exactly how to write a Band 9 conclusion quickly, how to manage your time effectively, and how to proofread your way to a top score.

Why Your Conclusion is Secretly Your Most Important Paragraph

To understand why conclusions are so vital, consider a trick used by a school science teacher, Mr Rafferty. When assigned extremely long, dry scientific journal articles, his students used a shortcut: they only read the introduction and the conclusion. By reading just those two parts, they could understand the entire article.

The same principle applies to your IELTS Writing Task 2 essay. If you were to cut out your introduction and your conclusion and show them to the examiner, they should understand exactly what you think about the question.

A great conclusion does two simple things:

  1. It states your position (your clear answer to the prompt).
  2. It summarizes your main ideas (the key points you made in the essay).

The 3-Step Formula for a Band 9 Conclusion

Writing a top-tier conclusion doesn't have to be complicated. In fact, you should break it down into exactly three parts:

1. The Cohesive Device (Linking Word)

Start your conclusion with a simple cohesive device. Do not waste time trying to memorize complex or unusual linking phrases. Just choose one of the following and memorize it:

  • "In conclusion,"
  • "To conclude,"

That is all you need. Since you only have to write one conclusion in your exam, pick one and move on.

2. State Your Position

Next, you must state your position. This should not be a new opinion. Look back at your introduction and paraphrase your thesis statement using different words and varied vocabulary.

> Important Note on Repetition: Many students fear they will lose marks for repeating themselves. This is a critical misunderstanding. The IELTS marking criteria requires a strong essay to present a clear position throughout the response. To make your position clear throughout, it must be consistent from your introduction all the way to your conclusion. Do not change your mind halfway through the essay, as this confuses the examiner.

3. Summarize Your Main Ideas

Finally, summarize the main points you discussed in your body paragraphs. Again, you can look at how you outlined these in your introduction and paraphrase them into your conclusion.

Be specific rather than vague. Avoid generic phrases like:

"It helps people in many ways."

Instead, mention the actual ideas you discussed in your essay.

A Band 9 Conclusion Example

Here is a practical look at how these three elements come together in a real essay. Consider this student-written conclusion that successfully applies this formula:

> "In conclusion, robots are taking over an ever-growing range of tasks both at home and in the workplace. The main driver behind this shift is the rapid progress being made in artificial intelligence, and in my view, this is an overwhelmingly positive trend since it meaningfully eases the workload that ordinary people have to shoulder in their day-to-day lives."

Notice how the introduction and conclusion act as mirror images of each other. The writer does not introduce any completely new concepts or contradict their previous arguments.

The 3-Pass Proofreading Method

Writing a good conclusion is only half the battle. Even a strong essay can have its score reduced by small grammatical errors, spelling mistakes, or typos.

To catch these, you should use the 3-Pass Proofreading Method, where every sentence gets checked three times:

  1. At the end of every sentence:
    Stop and reread the sentence you just wrote. Check for immediate grammar, vocabulary, or spelling mistakes and correct them.

  2. At the end of every paragraph:
    Read the paragraph as a whole. Ensure you have a clear topic sentence, clear explanations, and supporting examples. Catch any remaining language errors.

  3. At the end of the entire essay:
    Read the full essay from start to finish. Check the overall structure and look for any remaining small errors or typos.

The Usain Bolt Approach to Time Management

You might wonder:

"How can I possibly find the time to do all this proofreading within the strict exam limit?"

Successful candidates always aim to have at least 5 comfortable minutes at the end of the exam to proofread. However, they do not achieve this by memorizing generic time management tips.

Think of Usain Bolt, the fastest runner in the world. He didn't win gold medals by Googling time management tips before his races; he won because he trained extensively to become a better runner.

To manage your time on exam day, you must focus on becoming a better, faster writer weeks and months before you book your test.

How to Prepare Weeks and Months in Advance:

  • Analyze Practice Essays:
    After writing a practice essay, review it carefully and identify your errors.

  • Spot Error Patterns:
    Notice if you have recurring weaknesses, such as problems with punctuation, articles, spelling, or essay structure. By addressing these weaknesses early, you can turn them into strengths before test day.

  • Get Expert Feedback:
    Do not rely only on inexperienced teachers. Get feedback from qualified experts who understand exactly what mistakes reduce IELTS scores. They can help you solve major weaknesses long before your exam.

By doing this, exam-day proofreading becomes stress-free. You will have enough time to catch minor mistakes and ensure your writing reflects your true potential.

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